The "Why Us" Essay Workshop

Overview

Date:
October 27, 2024
Time:
2pm PDT/5pm EDT
Location:
Virtual on Zoom (RSVP below)
Speaker:
Link to register

Agenda

​Get ready to transform your "Why Us" essay into a standout piece that truly reflects your unique story and connection to your #1 choice school! Join us on October 27th from 5:00 PM to 6:00 PM EDT for a lively and engaging workshop hosted by Feiyang Liu (UCLA grad and ex-Berkeley Admissions Officer).

Whether you're a student or a parent, this is your chance to dive deep into crafting a compelling, non-generic essay that not only highlights why you're a perfect fit for the school but also stays true to who you are. Expect a fun and interactive session filled with actionable tips and advice that will elevate your early action or decision application. Don't miss out on this opportunity to make your essay shine and give yourself the best shot at submitting a moving and compelling application. See you there!

Questions We'll Answer

  • What is the role of a "Why Us" essay in showcasing fit beyond academic qualifications?
  • How do you strategically weave in specific academic and extracurricular offerings into your essay without sounding like you're just listing them?
  • How can you demonstrate passion and alignment with a school's values when you don't have many direct experiences with it yet?
  • What common mistakes do students make when writing their "Why Us" essays, and how can you avoid them?
  • How much of your essay should focus on the school's unique offerings versus your personal story and background?
  • And more!